Blown into the school assembly - wow. This is very powerful; even sitting here in Australia's summer afternoon with blues skies and light breezes. I was with you for a bit...and read and re-read it.
Hi Fiona. Thank you. The weather state that inspired it was pretty powerful as well!! It really did remind me of those doom-voiced prayers when I was a kid.
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I like the intensity that grows as the reader approaches the end. Well penned!
I can see it all so clearly Annie.
Hi Alfred. Thanks for dropping by and for leaving a comment. Can't help hearing the wind and the waves today.
Hi Robyn. Thanks. Wild weather here. I hope no-one's out in those waves.
Blown into the school assembly - wow. This is very powerful; even sitting here in Australia's summer afternoon with blues skies and light breezes. I was with you for a bit...and read and re-read it.
Hi Fiona. Thank you. The weather state that inspired it was pretty powerful as well!! It really did remind me of those doom-voiced prayers when I was a kid.
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