I love that since you are a also a musician, "the sound of him" becomes imagined in tones of timing--as if there is a loss of grace in the world when the sync is off.
Hi mansuetude. Thanks for your interesting thoughts. I quite liked how my distance from him made that happen with the sound and motion. It reminded me of old films.
Hi Gordon. Thanks so much. Had fun with these. And yes, I think some interesting starters have emerged. Lots on my desk at the mo, but will get back to them soon.
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I love that since you are a also a musician, "the sound of him" becomes imagined in tones of timing--as if there is a loss of grace in the world when the sync is off.
thanks for the stones.
Hi mansuetude. Thanks for your interesting thoughts. I quite liked how my distance from him made that happen with the sound and motion. It reminded me of old films.
Ending this month long poetry on a great note. Lovely!
Hi Mary Ann. Thanks so much. It's been great to post a stone every day and to have so many people drop by and leave comments. Thanks again.
A great stone to finish the month, Annie.
I think it is another poem that could be expanded in the future. You have 2 or 3 really great 'starters' for the future.
Hi Gordon. Thanks so much. Had fun with these. And yes, I think some interesting starters have emerged. Lots on my desk at the mo, but will get back to them soon.
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