Monday, 30 March 2009

Greening

Still looking stark from below, maybe they have surprised themselves by bursting out into leaf too soon, too gaudy in a sun still thin. But viewed from down the street, together they make a blush of green, bright against the slate of frowning sky. 

Everything is slightly odd in this light. The tall narrow houses are the colour of melting ice cream. Their shadows are purple grey. Their top floors still flooded with sun have a pink tinge like cheap makeup. 

Behind the blossom, behind the tree tops full of chirrup, a small luxury - the first seclusion from the neighbours across the street.

7 comments:

Jeane said...

I will practice finding more interesting things to say about your writing besides, I loved this - I will get better....

Annie said...

Hi Jeane. To know you read it and liked it is great. To know that you read it and liked it and then messaged me to tell me you loved it is even better. Thank you.

Gordon Mason said...

Like "tree tops full of chirrup" and "pink tinge like cheap makeup"!

Crafty Green Poet said...

The greening of trees makes so much difference to the atmosphere, seclusion being a major one I guess. Nice descriptions in here too

Annie said...

Hi Gordon. Finally feels like the street is coming back to life again.

Hi CGP. Thanks for dropping by.

A rambling rose said...

You write as well as you sketch! I can feel and see the'greening'!

Annie said...

Hi Rambling Rose. Thank you. It's a gorgeous time of year, isn't it?